Sunday, January 17, 2010

Cool Paper Rough Draft

To be cool is to be doing one's own thing, speaking up for justice, and avoiding drama. The underlying reason for the cool definition is the teenage archetypes that teenagers fall into. Being cool is to feel valued and good about ourselves. To do so, we fill up the hole inside us by masking, manipulating, costuming, adorning, and aggrandizing ourselves. But since this hole cannot be filled, we are constantly trying to find ways to seek attention and approval.

Based on the short stories that we wrote, we see that being cool is to resist the higher authority for a good cause. In Henry's story, the cool person refused to do what the teacher said, resisting someone in the higher power. In Kate's story and Jia Min's story, the main characters resisted the fake cool by embarrassing the bully and standing up for another. All these characters jumped "to the top of the hierarchy by doing something positive" (Amanda) and thus made them cool.

Being cool is all about sticking yourself into one of the teenage archetypes. Whether it is being the hero, the funny guy, or the jock, people know that becoming one of them will attract attention to them. "People pay attention to mythical roles" (Snyder) so by becoming one of the 'mythical roles' one gets the attention one has been wanting. Roles are defined before we are even brought into the world; our parents have this image of who they want us to be and carefully influence us to become the image. Even those who are accidentally brought into the world have their roles chosen. By neglecting them, they are most likely going to fall into the role of loner, loser, bully, or bad ass bad boy.

Roles are inevitable and therefore, our quest to become cool is also inevitable. If one acknowledges that one is playing the hero role and refuses to play any role, then that person is going to be playing the "refusing to play a role" role. Another person might notice that role, think of one as a cool person and then give attention to one while trying to fit into that role. Even the person refusing to play roles want attention. Everyone wants attention by playing roles and some get the attention (like the revolutionary) and some fail to obtain it (like the loner).

Drugs is another method people use to feel cool and good about themselves. Some take heroin to calm themselves down and to people within the same mindset would consider that cool. But taking drugs only gives a temporary feeling of cool. Therefore, another way to go about being cool and feeling important is to get someone else to value you. These people may include friends and family but getting others to value you causes you to become prone to peer pressure. Lastly, there is the "do good feel good" phenomenon; you do something good for someone and you feel good about yourself.

Our need to feel cool is caused by this hole inside us that we constantly try to fill up by talking down on others, applying makeup, using nicknames, etc. But after talking down on one person or getting the ears pierced, the emptiness comes back and others things need to be done to fill it up again. Other things may include talking down on more than one person or getting piercings in other places. This cycle prevents the hole to be filled up, because the hole cannot be filled up. Regardless, people cannot accept this emptiness as it is and are unable to give up the journey to become cool.

Cool is the quest to seek attention and to fulfill what is missing inside us. We fight the people who have more power than us so we can be the one on top, with the power. In doing so, we push ourselves into inevitable roles and these roles help us get the attention we want. We also try fill the emptiness inside us by seeking approval through drugs, acting unnatural, or dressing ourselves up. Unsatisfied with anything that we do to reach our goal, because cool changes as time progresses, we can never be the cool we want to be.

3 comments:

  1. Maggie:
    I like your thesis but are you saying this hole of ours are the emptiness that we feel (but may not notice) and then go to find something to be able to fill up this hole. You are also talking about how we are seeking for attention and approval by "masking, manipulating, costuming, adorning and aggrandizing ourselves" because we want to be valued.
    Thesis: We are unable to fill up this hole within ourselves so we are constantly finding ways to seek attention and approval by trying to be cool.

    I think your arguments are that all of us are falling into one of the "teenage archetypes". If we can be at the top of the cool hierarchy, we are able to feel what we are desiring. To be at the top, you are saying we need to become one of the "mythical roles" that society, or us has put out there for people who can be cool. If we are unable to fill the roles that people around us wants us to be, we would be falling down on the bottom of the hierarchy. I think your argument about roles and the quest to become cool is good because I also think it is in our nature that we want to become cool and by fitting in one of the roles that society sees highly, we would feel the glory in ourselves and from others.
    The holes in ourselves are the emptiness, and the feeling of wanting to become valued connects to those holes. We are stuck in our lives by constantly chasing after the thing that can help us feel better. Like the drug argument in your paper, how drugs can only give a person a temporary feeling of cool. I think it just affects, a waste of time for our lives to do things for other people since wanting to become cool is from the society's point of view. We forget how to do this our own way that can help us lessen this hole of ours. I think the holes in ourselves that you are talking about are for ourselves to fulfill by being what choices that society is giving to us.

    Hope this will help you:
    -I think you should put the last paragraph, your first body paragraph as you are talking about what is cool.
    -Talk about emptiness (western way, not eastern or you can talk about the buddhism for significance/connections or OPV).
    - Is cool a group or an individual thing? Is it because we want to be in a group that we change ourselves, as the individual to a groupie thing? Is being the top of the group the individual, or is being in the group but not at the top, the group? The person being in the top is the leader, does that mean the people who are not, are the copy cats of the leader? So does that mean those copycats, the look alikes would not feel value no more because they all look alike, dressed alike and etc. ?
    -Is cool a choice that we are making? Are we forced in this particular role that society is giving us or are we the one who is thinking that we are being looked to become at this particular role?
    -I like your arguments, but I think you can give more example from your street interviews, or from the books that we read.
    (yay, first to comment xD)

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  2. Maggie-

    We are constantly trying to fill the void in our lives with attention and approval. If the media has shown us anything, it is that the kids that come from a broken home are often the coolest. Now, this is not always true, but if you look at movies like Spider-Man, you can see this often is the case. See, in Spider-Man, Peter Parker has a happy life with with Aunt and Uncle, and has almost no mayhem in his home life. He is of course, a nerd. On the contrary, his neighbor, Mary-Jane Watson, comes from a home with an abusive father and is shown to be very cool at school. This can be explained as having a larger void to fill. You see, Peter is happy and as such he feels no need to live his life in any way other than the path his family enforces. Since he doesn't really need to break away from his mold, he doesn't need to be cool and becomes a nerd. Mary-Jane on the other hand greatly feels this need to be cool because she is being given a destructive and highly negative path at home. Therefore, she acts out and tries to be "cool". This is a cry for both attention and approval, both of which she was denied at home, whereas Peter had them in surplus.
    1- In you first argument, you use my cool story as a point of reference in summarizing a point. However, you misinterpreted the story by saying she refused to do the teachers work, because she does in fact do the work on the board for the class. Also, you mention that this and other stories demonstrate doing something positive to become cool, however my story doesn't really fit this mold. She isn't doing anything bad, but she isn't doing anything particularly positive either. I would rethink using this piece of evidence for this argument.
    2- I think that you should expand your drug argument. There are drugs less severe and more common drugs that are seen as much cooler than heroin that you could discuss. Take marijuana for example, which is used much more frequent and is exposed to teens at a much younger age and is more accepted. Also, heroin is too well known to be harmful to be as relevant.
    3- On a side not, some of your post appears in a different font than the rest of it, and while I believe it was intentional in the intro, it's use in the last few paragraphs was confusing.

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  3. 1. Thesis (rewritten): Emptiness has driven us to find value through masking, adorning, and aggrandizing ourselves, a process repeated and updated regularly to ensure constant approval.

    2. I liked how you focused mainly on roles and the fact that they are inescapable. A lot of us are born with lives that are already mapped out for us. And for those who don't have a parent dictating their every move, they're still limited and controlled by their environment. Therefore, we don't have as much freedom in picking our roles as one might like to think.
    When we do choose to follow a role, we try to live up to it as much as possible because we believe that the more we fill up an archetype, the more we fill up our own holes and the empty feeling that comes with it. This is directly linked to the way we feel about ourselves. We want to feel important. And the only way to feel important is from the approval and attention of others. So we spice up our acts hoping for applause from the audience and the louder the applause, the higher our "value" becomes.

    3. Stuff you should consider including:
    - Now that we know roles are inevitable, how should we make the best of these roles?
    - What are our options and which are the best ones?
    - Make better transitions btwn. your paragraphs.
    - Include more evidence like the stuff we read in class, Andy's lectures, student's blogs, your emptiness research, street and friend interviews, or talk about how you yourself fit into all this

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